Tuesday, October 21, 2008

path

the path of my deprivation leads from the point at witch I died inside and leads to the point where my vapid heart lies.

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ha, ha. There's that lie/lay thing again. Maybe I got it right this time.

2 comments:

haze said...

yeah you did ;)

but did you mean to spell "witch" like that...

i think it's very rhetorically effective if so. :)

starz said...

shen. i think you just got served.